What behavior do you see when his scrip runs? Do you see any output in your logs? It could be worth adding some logging to ensure that you are hitting the code that you expect to be hitting.
I would expect you to see an error in the logs like this:
Commit failed: Global symbol "$CFObj" requires explicit package name (did you forget to declare "my $CFObj"?)
In your Action commit code you use the variable $CFObj but it is not defined in that scope.
Also your action preparation code should return true at the end of that block or else the commit code will not run.
There is a lot of extra complexity added to this though that can make it confusing, if I were to put my two cents in I would consider doing it like this:
Custom Condition Code:
if ($self->TransactionObj->Type eq "CustomField" and
$self->TransactionObj->Field eq "53") {
return 1;
}
return 0;
Action Prep Code:
# No need to check if the custom field is applied to this Queue because we
# know the transaction 'Field' value is for the Severity CF.
return 1;